Wednesday, November 9, 2011

Martin the dragon

    Ones upon a time there was a dragon named Martin he lived in a cave he ate mean people. One time he wanted more food so he went to Adriana castle but Jesus J. did not let me get food so he got mad and started to     use fire.So he got all the food  by himself so this is the story of the dragon Martin so he will use fire on you if you do not give him food.
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  1. Student AccountNovember 9, 2011 at 9:42 AM

    This story was well written and there are a few things to work on.
    Ones-> Once
    spaces
    periods at the end of your sentences

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