Friday, November 18, 2011

The Super Game

   There was ones a girl named Andrea and a boy named Martin they were going to play an important game.So they were drinking a lot of water they had to have a lot of energy so they eat a lot of fruit and drank a lot of Sunny D they were ready to play the game.In first have they were losing 2-0 but in second have Andrea scored a goal every body was screaming gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool and Martin scored a goal and every one was screaming goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool it was 2-2 but Andrea and Martin scored the last goal and the people were screaming gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool and they won 2-3 and that was the super game by the gooooooooooooooooooooooool of Andrea and Martin they won the trofi.

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  1. This story was funny when Martin was reading "goal!"

    gol-> goal
    run-on sentences
    every one-> everyone

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